Practice run through of Thriller

This is the practice run through for the opening sequence of our thriller. We discovered from filming this there were a number of things that we needed to change including the length of the final clip as ours was only a minute and a half. This was only filmed from a wide shot, and therefore didn't show enough of a range of shots such as an over the shoulder shot of her on the computer and show what she is doing, a high angle shot of her on the computer to show her vulnerability, close ups of her face on the computer and when she is making tea to show her emotion which in this case would be fear and anxiety. There would need to be sound effects as in this clip we had to use our voices to make the phone ring and the pop up. We will need to design the pop up for the chain mail to make it more realistic and exciting. The dialogue in this clip was unrehearsed and boring so we are going to write a script that we will give to her actress so that the final piece includes emotion.